adapted within the FNAF franchise, texts like FNAF: The Silver Eyes trilogies (2015-2018) are less direct
adaptations and are more outdated to be used for study. Thus, this research will focus only on Into the Pit
(2019) short story and FNAF: Into the Pit (2024) video game in order to identify the challenges of adapting the
story.
Changes between original and adapted text
The first key difference of the short story Into the Pit (2019) and the adaptation Five Nights at Freddy’s
(FNAF): Into the Pit (2024) are the exposition of the stories. The story begins on the last day of school before
the summer holiday in the short story. We are exposed to the town that Oswald resides in, and the state of it.
We are also told about Oswald’s friend, Ben who moved away from the town, leaving him by himself.
Meanwhile, the video game brings us straight into the middle of summer holiday, where Oswald’s father is
driving to Jeff’s Pizza to drop him off as he heads to his part time job, where the two of them had a small bet
whether there is still a dead possum on the crossroad. Any mentions of Ben within the short story was removed
in the video game adaptation, outside of item interactions.
The rising action of the video game adaptation vastly differs from the original text. In Into the Pit, Oswald and
his father had a fight where Oswald complained about his parents’ financial status, and how his friend Ben gets
to have a vacation at a beach, while he is stuck in Jeff’s Pizza, with just enough money for a slice of the most
basic pizza. He then decided to play a prank on his father by hiding in a disgusting and abandoned ball pit in
Jeff’s Pizza. While hiding in it, Oswald finds himself travelling to the past; way before Jeff owned the pizza
place, and the place was called Freddy Fazbear’s Pizza. In the video game, Oswald jumped into the ball pit
within the first few minutes of the game, planning to prank his father who was late to pick him up. While in the
past, the video game moves further into the story by means of Oswald playing hide and seek, before stumbling
upon a scene of carnage as a creature similar to a rabbit animatronic goes around kidnapping children.
In Into the Pit (2019), Oswald spent a few days hanging out in 1985, hanging out with his new friends Chip
and Mike. The climax of the story then happens on one day, when he jumped into the ball pit, he came to
Freddy Fazbear’s Pizza that had erupted in chaos, with kids and parents running around and a man wearing a
yellow rabbit costume seemingly responsible for the murder and chaos. As the rabbit man chased him, Oswald
jumped back into the ballpit, attempting to return to the present, where he is confronted by his father. Before
being able to answer his father’s scolding, the rabbit man appeared from the ballpit as well before dragging his
father into the ballpit, and utilised a hypnosis technology to mask himself as Oswald’s father. The game’s
climax arrived as Oswald realised his father had been swapped by the rabbit and was watching his every move
every night. The rabbit would chase Oswald around the house in order to kill him, and Oswald is forced to
sneak out of his home to return back to the ball pit and find his father.
The falling action of both stories are roughly similar, with Oswald returning to the ball pit at night to find his
father. The only differences between the two are the duration in which Oswald’s action takes place. In the short
story, Oswald sneaked to the ball pit after the first day back to school after hearing some quotes of
encouragement by his new friend. That night, he tiptoed out of his house before diving into the ball pit and
counting to one hundred. Meanwhile, the game’s adaptation takes place over five days, with Oswald sneaking
out every night to the ball pit, attempting to find his father who was hidden in a hidden room. Every night,
Oswald would find other children who were trapped by the rabbit and help free them.
The ending of the stories are the biggest outliers in terms of differences. While in the original short story,
Oswald would find his father’s feet under the ball pit and struggles to pull his father up from the ball pit. Once
he’s pulled him up, the rabbit jumped on him, biting Oswald on the arm before getting knocked by him. The
rabbit would then get strangled by the ropes around the ball pit, ultimately killing him. Oswald then finally had
his chance to apologise to his father for ‘attempting to prank him’ and getting his father knocked out in the ball
pit. The two of them make amends with each other and leave Jeff’s Pizza in peace. However, in the game’s
version there are four separate endings, depending on the way you play the games. Below are all the endings
achievable within the game:-