difficulties such as limited vocabulary, first language interference, and structural omissions, it did not fully
investigate the underlying cognitive and instructional causes of these struggles. Future research may explore
how teaching methods, planning strategies, and cognitive load influence short-form narrative construction.
The pedagogical implications of these findings suggest that vocabulary expansion activities, such as lexical
notebooks or thematic word clusters, can help learners enrich their linguistic resources for storytelling.
Moreover, guided model-story analysis, in which students examine short texts with clearly defined narrative
elements, can enhance their awareness of how Freytag’s Pyramid operates in practice. Additionally, peer-
review workshops guided by checklists encourage collaborative learning and provide opportunities for students
to identify missing narrative elements in one another’s work. Educators can also employ digital tools such as
educational websites, mobile applications, and social media platforms to make the learning process more
interactive and engaging. Curriculum developers should critically review assessment requirements, particularly
word limits to ensure that students are provided with sufficient space to demonstrate their narrative
competence.
Future research directions could include comparative study between short-form and extended narrative writing
tasks to examine how word limits influence the inclusion of Freytag’s narrative elements. Experimental studies
could also explore the impacts of specific pedagogical interventions such as model text analysis, vocabulary
enhancement activities, or peer-review workshops on students’ narrative development. In addition, cross-
cultural comparisons could investigate whether similar narrative challenges are faced by ESL learners in
different educational contexts.
ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
I would like to extend my sincere gratitude to the 2025 first-semester students of the Faculty of
Communication and Media Studies and Diploma in Tourism Management, University Technology MARA
(UiTM), who gave permission to use their narrative writing for research purposes. I would also like to thank
my family and colleagues for supporting me throughout the research process.
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