Mirroring Social Constructivism in Academic Writing

This study explores how social constructivism influences academic writing through scaffolding, peer comments, and peer evaluation. Grounded in Lev Vygotsky’s Social Constructivism Theory (1978), the study examines the relationship between scaffold, Zone of Proximal Development (ZPD), and More Knowledgeable Other (MKO) in academic writing practices. A quantitative research design was employed using a 5-point Likert-scale survey distributed to 61 respondents. The instrument consisted of three main variables: scaffold, measured through step-by-step instruction and colour-coding; ZPD, measured through peer comments; and MKO, measured through evaluative review. Reliability analysis showed high internal consistency with Cronbach alpha values of .934 for scaffold, .877 for ZPD, and .907 for MKO, with an overall reliability score of .955. The findings revealed that respondents had positive perceptions of scaffolding, peer comments, and peer evaluation in improving academic writing skills. Students agreed that step-by-step guidance and colour-coding helped them understand essay structures more effectively, while peer comments and evaluative reviews enhanced clarity, organization, and understanding of mistakes in essay writing. Correlation analysis further indicated strong positive relationships between scaffold and ZPD (r=.735), ZPD and MKO (r=.815), and MKO and scaffold (r=.768), with all relationships being statistically significant at p<.001. The study highlights the importance of collaborative learning, guided support, and peer interaction in academic writing development. The findings suggest that integrating scaffolding and peer-based strategies into writing instruction can improve learners’ confidence, engagement, and writing performance while promoting more interactive and meaningful academic learning experiences.

social constructivism, academic writing, scaffolding, , zone of proximal development (ZPD), more knowledgeable other (MKO).

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